For my final webtext, I need to do more research for it. Such as the color part, the point is weak and I need more evidence for it. I also want to find more pictures to illustrate my webtext vividly because some of the names were used a long time ago. My audience may not quite understand them. Pictures will help them learn it better. Language problem is another issue I need to concern for my final webtext. There are some grammar errors I need to fix and some sentences I need to revise.
My webtext fits our webzine because the topic I choose is entertaining. Although fashion has become more commercial, it is still very pleasant for our visual aims. I am sure my audience will enjoy my topic. Also, I did research for my topic, just like my other fellow students. We did the same process for our topics. That’s important because we will put our webtext together as a whole project.
1 comment:
The topic you chose is also very original, which is another reason it is a good addition to the Webzine.
I agree that adding more images will help your reader understand the text better.
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