1. What do you think I can develop my topic so that it can be more academic? 2. Which part should be more specific? 3. What can be added in order to make my essay more interesting? (to be continued...)
1. I was thinking about that while you were presenting. I think offering your audience the history of what you are talking about (like I suggested on you draft) will help.
2. This will be easier for me to answer when I see your 1000 - word draft.
3. Adding cultural information will make it more interesting, which is related to the history part.
I'm very excited about this topic, and looking forward to talking to you about it. =)
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1. I was thinking about that while you were presenting. I think offering your audience the history of what you are talking about (like I suggested on you draft) will help.
2. This will be easier for me to answer when I see your 1000 - word draft.
3. Adding cultural information will make it more interesting, which is related to the history part.
I'm very excited about this topic, and looking forward to talking to you about it. =)
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