post-conference
basically, my project has no big problems, but some definitions need more explaination. Further more, I will add pictures to my webtext to illustrate my points.
Post-peer review
From the feedback Sara gave me, I can see she wants me to write more about today's fashion and how it reflects feminism. She also points out that one of my links cannot work so I should fix it before my next step. about the pictures, I think fashion is not all about colorful stuffs. For instance, Chanel use black and white mostly and it is classic. I believe simplicity can also be fashion. Also I will make my audience more clear. I really appreciate her feedback. It helps me improve my webtext.
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Shadow, with the images, you should provide images that will illustrate what you're talking about in your text.
For example, when you talk about feudal China, providing an image illustrating what women wore then would be a good idea. That would help your reader visualize what you are talking about.
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